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Our $uccess blog will feature writing, marketing, and publishing tips we continue to learn since writing our 2009 INDIE Finalist workbook $uccess, Your Path to a Successful Book keeping our readers abreast of the everchanging skills required to write, publish and sell a successful book. We will also have guest commentators. Achieving your goals as a writer is what matters. Anything we can do to help you get there is our goal. We welcome your comments and hope you will sign up for our bi-monthly (or whenever we have enough material) newsletter.

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Steve Harrison says, “The best way to sell a product – a book, DVD, t-shirt, coffee, whatever – is by telling a story

Wednesday, April 13th, 2011

Bill and Steve Harrison’s Reporter Connection, always starts out with helpful suggestions. I personally find this tip extremely valuable since I agree with it 100%.

I’ve said it a million times, and now the New York Times says it too. The best way to sell a product – a book, DVD, T-shirt, coffee, whatever – is by telling a story. How did you come up with the idea? What challenges did you face and how did you overcome them? Telling the story-behind-the-story is a great way to connect with readers. Read this piece for a great checklist of questions that can help you develop your story.

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Maralyn D. Hill, President
International Food Wine & Travel Writers Association
Books By Hills Success With Writing Where & What in the World
Member: Society of Professional JournalistsFinalist in the Writing and Publishing category of the 2009 Next Generation Indie Book Awards, “$uccess, Your Path to a Successful Book,”

Preparing Your Manuscript for the Printer or Article for Publication

Saturday, April 2nd, 2011

This was first printed in my column $uccessful with Words, in The Big Blend Magazine.

No matter how often this topic is covered, all writers need to remind themselves over and over again of its vital importance. Yesterday, I held a lengthy phone conversation with a good friend who has been working five years on her book. Unfortunately, her first proof from the publisher is a disaster. Even more unfortunately, much of this could have been avoided. My friend used a professional editor, but that was not enough.

Some of the necessary steps in preparation, frequently forgotten, include:

  • Read your work out loud. You may say you hear the words so you don’t have to say them. This is totally wrong. Believe me, it is because you know your own words that you are likely to miss things. When you read out loud, you stumble on errors no matter how good a writer you are.
  • Use a thesaurus before you submit. Frequently, when you get a proof, you will notice you used the same word over and over, as well as close together. When you are giving your manuscript or article a final read before submitting, look for this problem. If you can’t think of another word to replace, rely on a thesaurus. If you don’t have one, they are available online.
    • If you are using print-on-demand or a small local press, be sure your work is formatted to the publisher’s specifications. Insist on knowing their exact specifications, as it will save you time in the proofing process. This is especially important if you are including charts or photos. Formatting requirements apply to the following:
      • Margins.
      • Line spacing.
      • Paragraph indenting or not.
      • Only hit enter at the end of a paragraph. Using this command at the end of a line on your screen will cause a mess.
    • Use a font that is easy to read. I learned this the hard way. Pretty is not always clear.
    • Keep your layout simple. When you have more than one or two levels of indentations, they do not transfer easily to a different program. Frequently, a great deal of your copy will not be lined up properly. If you don’t have a choice, then it will be worth the hours of proofing to make adjustments due to program conversion. If you possibly can write so you only have two levels of indentations (like this article), you will be happier with the finished result.
    • Be sure your graphs, photos, charts, etc. are sized to fit the space available.
    • Prepare your chapter headings the way your want them. Be consistent, otherwise one will show up with all words capitalized and the next will have some of the words capitalized.

    If you are being published by a traditional publisher, you may think the above doesn’t apply. It does. The more responsibility you take yourself for the material you submit, the happier you will be with the finished product.

    You can see the original post on Successful with Words.

    Maralyn D. Hill, President
    International Food Wine & Travel Writers Association
    Books By Hills Success With Writing Where & What in the World
    Member: Society of Professional Journalists

    Finalist in the Writing and Publishing category of the 2009 Next Generation Indie Book Awards, ”$uccess, Your Path to a Successful Book,”

Bios and Profiles

Tuesday, February 1st, 2011

This article was first featured on The Big Blend Magazine.

How many good profiles/bios do you need? You should have several, especially if you are building your presence online.

The first profile I was asked to write was for Time-Warner Cable.  Having been in the advertising and marketing world, I thought that was an easy assignment and whipped up a business profile. It was quickly returned and I was told to make it personal and flush it out. At the time, I was used to business writing, not showing my personal side. But I did what I was told for that particular TV and web project, “Dishing with Carolina Chefs.” It worked.

Of course, the above instance was before I knew anything about building an online presence.  Since March, 2008, I’ve been dealing with online in a larger manner and discovered I needed several different profiles of different lengths. The good thing about this is once you have a good long and complete profile, it is easy to shorten and adjust to particular needs.

I’d suggest the following: 250 words, including personal information about family; 100 words, business related; 35-50 words for bare basics; and 15-20 words for a one or two liner.  Be somewhat cautious about getting too personal. I use on-line sites for business networking, so I prefer a business approach.

Focus on your area of expertise. Even though I’ve an advertising and marketing background, my online profiles focus on writing, book marketing, food and travel. I don’t recommend splitting yourself among several categories, as it is easier to be an expert in one. However, personally, I’m not willing to give up writing or book marketing and I was born for food and travel and telling the tale. I’ve co-authored books in the above areas. So I’ve one blog for writing,www.noralyn.com/blogger/success and another for food and global adventures, www.noralyn.com/blogger/blog1. Since I am diversified, this makes it more difficult to market myself and takes more time.

Depending where I’m using my profile, I use one towards writing or one towards food and travel. Rarely do I use both. Think about your area of expertise and focus on topic. Sell yourself and your expertise.

The 15-50 word profiles are more difficult than longer versions as you only want current and relevant words. It doesn’t matter if you have a long impressive career in another field from that which you are currently selling. Use words that sell what you have to offer now. Pick words that define you. If you are selling a product, it is better to leave your family out of it. People on business sites want to know, “What’s In It for Me” (WIFM)? Why should they use, buy or be interested in what you have to offer?

Below are two examples for articles on food and travel and two examples promoting our book “Success.” You can also read a longer profile on The Big Blend and a much longer one on www.noralyn.com. These all continually get updated.

Maralyn D. Hill is a freelance writer who was born to travel and tell the story. You can read more about Maralyn atwww.BooksByHills.com (24 words).

Maralyn and Brenda Hill co-authored “Our Love Affairs with Food & Travel,” and with free-lancer Norm Hill, comprise the dynamic “Hill Team” of travel journalists. Maralyn and Norm worked together for this excursion (33 words).

“$uccess, Your Path to a Successful Book”—This is the book we wished we had read before publishing our first two books, “Our Love Affairs with Food and Travel,” and with French Master Chef Hervé Laurent, “Cooking Secrets, The Why and How.” The $uccess workbook will inspire you to shape life’s raw moments, then publish your passion into a successful book through proven marketing techniques. Our goal with this book is to help writers master the skills to publish their own book successfully (83 words).

“$uccess, Your Path to a Successful Book”—This is the book we wished we had read before publishing our first two books. The $uccess workbook will inspire and help you to publish your passion into a successful book through proven marketing techniques (42 words).

When you have your profiles done in advance, it is easy to adjust them for a newspaper interview, magazine article, website, or networking site.

Maralyn D. Hill, President
International Food Wine & Travel Writers Association
Books By Hills Success With Writing Where & What in the World
Member: Society of Professional Journalists

Finalist in the Writing and Publishing category of the 2009 Next Generation Indie Book Awards, ”$uccess, Your Path to a Successful Book,”