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Archive for December, 2008

SLOG – Editing 2

Thursday, December 18th, 2008

  • Excerpt from Success, Your Path to a Successful Book. by Maralyn D. Hill and Brenda C. Hill.

    Another favorite author, whom we urge all new writers to read early in the process, is Natalie Goldberg. Her famous book, Writing Down the Bones, known as bones in the writing industry, is, to us, The Bible.

    Here is a workshop exercise she taught us:

  • Open your laptop or take a paper and pen, name a subject, for example… the worst day of my life was, or, the happiest moment I ever experienced was when…
  • Now write, do not think. Do not the stop the pen from moving, no punctuation, spaces, paragraphs, just nonstop writing from the core of your gut, or heart. No stopping by your brain.

    Stop reading right now and try it. At first you will ache to put in a period, or stop to read it over. Just keep truckin’. Stop when you said what you felt – a paragraph or a page. Now take a breath. You are exhilarated… maybe exhausted, but you are free!

    The best part – this may be the best writing you have ever done. You are writing down to your bones.

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SLOG – Editing 1

Monday, December 15th, 2008


Excerpt from Success, Your Path to a Successful Book
by Maralyn D. Hill and Brenda C. Hill.

One of the best rules of editing we learned from our good friend and teacher at the Santa Barbara Writer’s Conference, Cork Millner (yes, he writes books on wine):

  • Do not edit while writing. You can go back and fine tune after it is all on the computer.
  • Do not do the final edit yourself. You may make the same mistake you made in the first place.
  • Plus, it is best to have a trained professional and objective eye give a critique.

We’re also going to paraphrase Cork’s editing tip that we mentioned earlier:
Take a pen to almost every… and, but, yet, so, however, and too that do not add meaning to your story. Circle those little words. Now look at your page. It will resemble a bunch of Cheerios. We call them lifesavers. Remove these lifesavers and your shorter story will sing.

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Maralyn D. Hill and Brenda C. Hill
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SLOG Editing and Formatting

Saturday, December 13th, 2008


This excerpt is from Success, Your Path to a Successful Book by Maralyn D. Hill and Brenda C. Hill

“Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored.” -Aldous Huxley

It is difficult for all of us to keep up with the latest trends and rules of grammar. Rules change with the times.

Although we have both worked as editors, we realize that we need an objective editor for the final copy before the manuscript goes to press. We are fortunate in having Norman Hill, who makes up the third part of the Hill team.


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